Poetry Journey #17

"A Possible Wife" - Cultural Specificity vs. Exoticism

My Most Original Attempt

This week's poem:

A Possible Wife

She moves with quiet certainty,
Her eyes holding the frost of Siberia and fire of Pushkin's verse.
Not a word wasted, not a gesture without purpose.
She carries the weight of the past and the shape of the future.
In her silence, the soul of Russia endures.

My Immediate Thoughts: This might be my most original poem yet, but I'm worried about cultural appropriation or stereotyping.

What I Think Works:

• "Frost of Siberia and fire of Pushkin's verse" feels original and specific

• The brevity creates impact rather than emptiness

• Cultural references feel earned, not decorative

• "Not a word wasted" shows rather than tells

What Makes Me Nervous:

• Am I romanticising Russian culture?

• Is this specific enough or still somewhat abstract?

• Does "soul of Russia" cross into stereotype?

Technical Elements:

• Free verse that feels intentional

• Strong imagery grounded in specific cultural references

• Good balance of concrete and abstract

What I'm Learning: Cultural specificity can create originality, but I need to be careful about respect vs. exoticism.

Questions I'm Wrestling With:

• How do you write about other cultures respectfully?

• Does this feel authentic or like cultural tourism?

• Is the brevity effective or underdeveloped?

Questions for Readers:

• Does this feel respectful or appropriative?

• Which line is strongest?

• Should I expand this or leave it condensed?

• How do you balance cultural specificity with universality?