Poetry Journey #4
Studying Poets I Admire - What Can I Learn?
Learning from the Masters
This week I studied poets whose work resonates with my themes but who actually get published. Here's what I'm discovering:
Pablo Neruda - What He Does That I Don't: His sensual imagery is specific, not abstract. Instead of "your beauty," he writes "your silence that is hard and bright as stars." I need concrete details.
Ada Limón - Her Contemporary Voice: She writes about love and bodies without sounding outdated. Her language feels current, lived-in. My language feels like I'm trying to sound "poetic."
Richard Siken - Emotional Intensity Without Sentimentality: His passion is urgent and specific. He earns his emotional moments through precise imagery and unexpected turns.
What I'm Learning:
Specificity over abstraction - "your eyes" vs. "the way light catches in the left corner of your right eye"
Earned emotion - big feelings need concrete foundations
Contemporary language - poetry can sound like how people actually think and speak
Controlled intensity - passion doesn't mean losing craft
Exercises I'm Trying:
Rewriting my abstract lines with concrete imagery
Reading my poems aloud to catch outdated language
Looking for the specific moment behind each general statement
Questions for Readers:
Which contemporary poets influence your work?
How do you balance learning from others without copying their style?
What's the difference between influence and imitation?